My unconscious body is overwhelmed with feelings of emotions,
dreams that tempt the mind.
A park bench, along the river pathway, welcomes me to sit with my beloved.
Pleasantly companionable, the river floats gracefully as the sun picks through a portrait foliage of fall.
His hand in mine, the desire for him to kiss my pleasurable lips tormented my mind.
“Do I launch myself into his embrace,
Surprising his views of me,
Or do I wait for him to pull me tight, towards his desirable lips,
With eyes penetrating my soul to the deepest end of our passion?”
Some of your phrasing releases pictures – rather wonderful that you can ‘see’ character with no description – must be a level of ‘show don’t tell’ most of us don’t reach.
Very evocative language – brief poem but sensual and intense. Like it.